LO4: Evaluating feedback

Completed advert after feedback

This is my radio advert adjusted to the feedback I got from my survey. The improvements I acted on will be displayed below:

Due to contingencies I could not get an additional voice actor, however I re-recorded the bits I could improve. I changed the opening question to match the tone of the advert. as well as, re recorded the line ''With your hosts, Isaac and Tom" to remove the voice crack.

This is a screen shot of the adjusted voice lines: